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A tale of Two Brother's

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One day, a riolu named ridly wakes up in his family's den where his older brother, a lucario named Lucas and his mother. Another lucario names Lara. Ridly lived happily with his mother but Lucas and his friends bullied him. Lara tried to make him stop but Lucas just didn't care and kept doing it.

Our story starts with ridly walking down the forest path looking for food until he bumped in flinn the floatzel,  one of Lucas' friends. Ridly tried to quickly run but flinn grabbed his tail and pulled him into the air "l-let me go!" Ridly yelled in protest "hmmmm, nah. Wimp" he says with a chuckle as he walks off, still carrying ridly by his tail "it starting to hurt! Let go!" Ridly yelled as flinn covers his muzzle with ice, making it so he can't yell anymore. Ridly sighs and whimpers as flinn goes Into a clearing where Lucas and his other friends are, a espeon named espy, a seviper named Seth, and a lopunny named Lucy "hey guys, look who I found" flinn said with a chuckle as they look over to him holding ridly where tears are starting to form in his eyes due to the slight pain coming from his tail "look at how pathic he is, he's already crying!" Seth said mockingly as flinn drops him in the middle of the group. before he could run Seth coils around him tightly "what 'fun' can we do with him?" Espy asks " we can tie him up and leaving him hanging upside down on a tree all day " Lucy suggests "nah, we did that a few days ago, needs to be something new" Lucas says "hmmm, how I have a idea!" Espy says as she whispers it to Lucas "perfect" he says as he nods "do it now" Lucas says as she nods and glows, making ridly glow too. Espy was making ridly see all of his worst fears, making him whimper and cry as they laugh at him. He struggles desperately to get out if seth's coils but he only tightened, making him cry more "your brothers pathetic " Lucy comments as Lucas chuckles "I know" he replies as a aura sphere hits him in the back if the head "hey!" Lucas says growling and turning around to see that his attacker was Lara "leave him alone!" She yells as she glows with aura "we were only playing around "flinn said as they left, leaving ridly curled up on the ground, crying heavily. Lara runs over and sighs "it's ok, mummy's here now" Lara said as she cuddles ridly and walks home with him.

That night Lucas walks into the den only to be greeted by a very annoyed Lara "why do you do this to him!?" Lara yells at Lucas "it's funny" Lucas replies only to get slapped by Lara "he is in his room and he has blocked the entrance, he says he's never coming out" Lara said "so? " Lucas replies "go apologise to him! " Lara says "why me? It wasn't my fault, my friends found him, he needs to be less of a wimp" Lucas says as he gets punched by Lara "he will never become stronger if his only brother keeps hurting him and humiliating him!" She yells at Lucas "so go apologise!" She added "ugh, fine" he replies as he goes to his room and teleports into it, bypassing the large rock that was blocking the entrance. "g-go away" ridly says to him, scared. Lucas chuckles and walks over "s-stay away!" Ridly says as he makes a aura sphere in his paw "just shut up and listen ok?" Lucas said as he got closer, making ridly throw the aura sphere at him, it hits him directly in the groan, making him yelp "you little shit! I come here to apologise and this is what I get!?" Lucas says in pure anger "a-apologise?" Ridly repeats as Lucas grabs him roughly and picks him up "not anymore" Lucas says as he punches ridly in the gut, making him fly into a wall. Lucas grins and walks over, and starts to kick him hard while he was down, he kept going until he heard a loud *snap*. He had broken ridly's arm, making him yell loudly "so weak" he comments as he teleports back outside his room and goes to his own. Lara has thought he apologised as she smiles and goes to her own room to sleep the night.

In the morning Lara wakes up and goes to check on ridly, after about 10 minutes of punching the rock it breaks, allowing her to walk into ridly's room "ridly? You ok in here?" Lara asks as she goes over to him and picks him up, she was shocked to see his arm broken and ridly almost dead from blood loss "ridly!" She exclaims as she gets up, now angry at Lucas "I thought he apologised last night!" Lara says angered as she goes into Lucas' room only to find he's not there. Lara sighs and tends to ridly's broken arm and wounds "I'm sure in a few weeks you'll make a full recovery!" Lara said, trying to cheer him up "just, stay close to our den, ok? And avoid those bullies" Lara said as ridly nodded. His arm now in a cast "good, now I'm going to go get some breakfast and you stay here" Lara said as she walked out with a small sac. Ridly sighs and waits for Lara to return.

A few minutes has gone by as espy walks into the den, ridly looks at her and backs away, scared  "aww, did little baby break his little arm?" Espy says in a mocking tone "c'mon, you're coming with me" espy said "n-no..." Ridly replied as he was about to run only to get knocked out by a physic ball hitting his head "he got knocked out from that? Wow, he is weak" espy said as she carries him out of the den.

Ridly soon wakes up, tied up and hanging upside down by his legs "look whose finally awake" flinn said as ridly looked around and saw he was hanging from a tree with Seth, espy, flinn, Lucy and Lucas standing around him "what can we do with him today?" Lucy asks "I can go into his head and find his worst fears~" espy replies as they smirk "do that" Seth said as espy goes into ridly's head. She soon finds that ridly had two major fears; getting eaten alive and spiders "seems like our 'friend' here had a fear of spiders and vore~" espy's says with a chuckle. Ridly didn't know what vore was and was confused when she said He was scared of it "Seth? Don't you have a Galvantula friend?" Flinn asks "why yes I do~ lets go pay him a visit with ridly "Seth replies as Lucas grabs ridly and walks off "n-no...l-let me go..." Ridly says as he squirms. Suddenly two sharp needles penetrate his arm and he stops moving, Seth had bitten him and injected paralysing venom into him. Ridly starts to cry as they laugh at him "does he ever stop crying?" Flinn asks "probably not" Lucy says as they laugh more. They soon reach a large cave with cobwebs everywhere. They walk in and write a note, they place ridly Inside and places the note on him then they walk out, chuckling. Ridly cries as a large Galvantulanamed arope walks into view, making ridly go wide eye and desperately try to move but couldn't. Arope reads the note that said 'you can whatever you like but don't kill him. PS: he has a fear of vore so you can eat him ' arope chuckles and grabs ridly, before placing him on a very sticky web where 3 web cacoons of old prey was beside him. Arope starts to wrap ridly in web, ridly crys loudly. Not wanting to die at the claws of a spider. Arope stops so his muzzle and eyes were left out so he can talk and see . Ridly whimpers as arope pushes the cacooned riolu into his mouth, ridly see's this and freaks out, finally being able to move but the webs make it impossible to move much so he just squirms slightly as arope gulps him in, going slow seeing ridly's fear filled eyes "p-please stop.." Ridly begged, whimpering as his head is the only thing left out, arope grins and rubs his mandibles across his face, making him struggle weakly, not liking it. Arope has had his fun and gulps hard, pulling ridly in fully and down his wet gullet. Ridly soon lands in a small pool of weak acid which started to melt the webs. He gets up and bangs on the walls "let me out!!" He yells out but all he got was the fake snoring of arope. Ridly looses all hope and curls up out of the acids, hoping Lucas wasn't cruel enough to kill him. Ridly was starting to fall asleep but he tried to stay away 'I-if I fall asleep I'll slide Into the acids...." Ridly thinks as he sat up, just then his stomach growls loudly, he had not eaten anything since yesterday afternoon. "I'm going to die in here...." Ridly thinks as he sobs. Espy was watching through telekinesis and was showing Lucas and the others "he is such a baby" flinn said as they laugh. Suddenly they all fall over, paralysed "huh!?" Lucy says in surprised as a very pissed off Lara cones into view, she used extreamspeed to hit all of their pressure points, making them fall over. "Where is he!?" She yelled at them. They didn't reply so Lara grabbed flinn by his neck and throws him Into a tree "tell me!" She yells as she glows in a blood red aura "w-with arope" Lucy said "show me" Lara said as she picks Lucy up by her ears. Lucy starts to tell where the location of where arope was. Lara growls as she  drops Lucy and runs off "she's scary when she's angry" espy commented "never seen this side of her" Lucas said as they sat up and waited.

Lara enters the cave and finds arope, rubbing his belly. Lara connected the dots and throws a aura sphere at him, making him fall off his web "give him to me!" She yells as aura claws form around her paws  "you're going to have to def-" he was cut off by Lara easily knocking him out in a single hit "stupid spider" Lara commented as she pulls ridly out of his belly and hugs him, ridly was terrified and was sobbing heavily. Lara sighs and cuddles him as she walks home, she places him on a bed and gave him some Oren berries, he hasn't said a word since Lara saved him which made her worried about his mental state "I need to talk to lucas" Lara said as she waited for him to return, eventually, he does, as Lara walks up to him "you really did it this time!" Lara yelled at him "what?" Lucas asked "you know exactly what!"Lara replied "this is about ridly?" Lucas asks "of course it is! Look what you did to him!" Lara yelled as she points at ridly, who was just lying there, not moving or blinking, a emotionless expression on his face "it was funny" Lucas says "not for him! You traumatised him!" Lara said "whatever" Lucas says as he walks into his room and starts to train "what am I going to do with him..." Lara said, sighing and taking ridly to his room, placing him into his bed and walking to her room and goes to sleep. Ridly suddenly gets up, anger in his eyes as he sneaks to Lucas's room and watches him play around with his aura. He growls and fires a aura sphere, aiming at his legs, making him fall over, when the aura sphere he had in his paws's hit the ground it exploded, making a large explosion happen that engulfs the whole den in fire, ridly was blasted back and into his room. His fur lightly burnt "holy shit!" He exclaims as he starts to dig out before the fire kills him "what happened!?" Ridly thinks as he makes it outside "I killed him! I killed Lara! I'm a murderer!" Ridly says as he runs away from his burning  den, crying.

*lucas POV*
-5 minutes earlier-

"Whatever" Lucas says as he walks into his room and starts to train using aura "time to see if I can use aura nova~" Lucas says as he charges a very unstable aura sphere, aura nova was a very dangerous aura sphere designed to cause a massive explosion at the cost of draining almost all of the users aura for a few hours. Lucas smirks when he creates it and starts to toss it around with his paws, chuckling. Suddenly he feels his legs give way as something hits them, making him fall over, dropping the aura sphere, as soon as it hits the ground a massive explosion, pushing him against the wall, he quickly teleports out using up the rest of his aura but he is very weak and passes out in a tree outside the den, suddenly a fearow swoops down and grabs him, then flies off.

*lara's pov*
-5 minutes earlier-

"Whatever" Lucas says as he walks off Into his room "what am I going to do with him..." Lara thinks as she goes into her own room and lies down "I need to teach him a lession" Lara says as she sneaks out and goes to her friend, a large and scary looking charizard "chad, I need your help" lara said as he sat up "better be good if it's this late" he replies "I need help scaring my son, Lucas " Lara said "only if I keep you in my belly for a a day" chad replies "alright fine" Lara says as they walk out and towards her den only to find it is engulfed in flames "oh no!" Lara yells as she gets close to the fire "chad! Please go in and save my kids!" Lara begs as chad rolls his eyes, walking into the fire, he looks around and goes into ridly's room only to find it had collapsed and rocks were everywhere. Chad then goes into Lucas' room and finds it was empty, except for some pile of ashes left from the rocks where the aura sphere had landed He then goes into Lara's room but no one was there, he then goes out and goes to Lara "I fear they are dead" chad says as Lara cries "one of them was crushed under rocks and the other is a pile of ash " chad explains "who ever did this is going to pay!" Lara yells as she cries.

*flinn's pov*
-5 minutes earlier-
Flinn was bored, he was sitting next to espy, Seth and Lucy "what should we do?" Lucy asks "we can go to Lucas' place "espy suggested "nah, Lara might think we are there for that wimp" Seth replies "we will just say we're here for Lucas" flinn says as he walks off towards Lucas' den then suddenly it explodes just before they walk in "woah!" Flinn exclaims as they get knocked back from the blast "what happened!" Espy says as Seth see's ridly run away from a newly made hole "I think ridly killed Lucas" Seth says as he points to him "espy, stay here to make sure, me and the others are going after the wimp" flinn says as she nods and waits in a tree. Flinn, Lucy and Seth all chase after ridly.

Risky was weak due to the explosion and his arm being even more hurt when he landed on it, suddenly he gets coiled up by Seth "gah!" Ridly yells as Seth tightens "hello ridly" flinn said as he and Lucy comes into view "where's Lucas?" Lucy asks "u-uh..." Ridly says as Seth tightened, making him yell in pain "tell us!" Seth said "he's dead" espy said as she walked over "either crushed or a pile of ash" she added as ridly cries, knowing one of them had to of been Lara "so he's dead and this little wimp killed him" Seth said as he tightened more. Ridly cries out as a large flash of light happens, blinding everyone. When they regain their vision ridly was gone "where did he go!?" Seth said as they growl "find that wimp!" Flinn commanded as they go off in different directions to find ridly.

Ridly slowly regains sight and see's he was in the arms of a large female raichu "you ok there bud?" She asks as she rests in her den, beside a pikachu and two pichu "I-I'm fine miss..." Ridly slowly says. "Why were those Pokemon trying to kill you?" She asks "I-I killed their friend; my brother..." Ridly said while crying "so you killed your brother?" Raichu said in a flat tone as her expression turned from compassion to slight anger "only one thing to do with murderers" raichu said as she places ridly's head into her mouth. Ridly yelps and struggles but gets shocked by raichu so he goes limp, sobbing "your sobs won't save you" raichu said, gulping ridly's head down, his body beginning to follow "please ....no" ridly begs as raichu ignores him and swallows hard, pushing his arms and torso in, he starts to yell as his broken arm is compressed against the tight throat. Raichu growls at ridly and shocks him until he stops yelling. Ridly had fainted from the shocks. Raichu sighs and swallows, sending ridly's body into her stomach which was filled with acid that starts to melt his fur already. Raichu curls up and goes to sleep as her kids hug her slightly bulging belly, she yawns then falls asleep, leaving ridly to digest in her belly.

"We lost him!" Seth calls out "he couldn't of just disappeared! find him!" Flinn yells back as espy and Lucy give up looking "lets just face it, he's gone "Lucy said "we need to kill that little runt" flinn replied "why? He has no home anymore and it's dark, he won't last long out here alone" espy said "he might already be dead" she added "fine, I'm going home" flinn said as they all go to their different homes.

Lucas starts to wake up, "where am I?" Lucas thinks to himself as he looks around and see's he is tied up in what seems to be a large birds nest in a cave "ok...this is weird" he thinks as he notices eggs beside him "looks like I was meant to be breakfast for some bird" Lucas comments as he gets up and teleports out of his bindings, being asleep for a few hours regained all his strength "someone's about to have a real bad day" Lucas says as he smashes and destroys all 4 egg's in the nest " now to find the mot-" he was cut off by a very furious fearow using air cutter on him "there you are!" He yells at fearow as he gets ready to fight the large bird. Fearow charges at Lucas but he simply dodges and uses aura sphere on the fearow's back but it didn't do much due to the type match up.  "I'm at a disadvantage here" Lucas thinks as he decides running is the best option so he runs outside and away from the fearow who keeps trying to grab him. Suddenly as the fearow was preparing to dive at Lucas a charizard flies pass and grabs the fearow then flies off quickly. Lucas watches and chuckles "bird brain" he says as he walks off, looking for anything he could remember so he can find his way back home.

Lara kept crying out front of the burning den, charizard trying to confront her "my kids! My home! My life is destroyed!" Lara says angerily as she kept crying "look, how about you live with me for the meantime while the water types put out the fire" chad said as Lara nods getting up. She looks at her burning den where a group of water type Pokemon were trying to put out the fire "c'mon" chad said as he carried Lara to him den.

Ridly begins to slowly wake up, he looks around only to find his arm and legs gone; melted by the acids. He whimpers and drags himself out of the acids, lying on a small piece of stomach out of the acids and sobbing, 'i'm going to die in this stomach' is all he could think. Pichu  heard his crying and pushed the bulge, making him splash in the acids "h-hey!" Ridly says "be quiet and digest in there!" Pichu replies as he pushes against raichu's belly, making it so he can't get out of the acids. Raichu starts to wake up and gets up, looking at her son pushing Into her belly "what's the matter? " she asks "the bad Pokemon is still alive" he replies as he pointed to her belly "you still alive in there riolu?" she asks as I faintly reply "y-yes...." "You're quiet strong to survive for this long" raichu says "but there's no point in resisting my acids, I won't let you out" raichu said, crushing ridly's hopes of her letting him out. Ridly sobs as he curls up "I-it's not my fault....it's not my fault...." Ridly kept repeating to himself as he kept sobbing "what's not your fault?" Raichu asks "I...didn't mean to kill him..,it was a accident..."  Ridly says "how?" Raichu asks him "I just....wanted to hurt him....not kill him..." Ridly said while crying "o-oh..." Raichu said, feeling terrible for the misunderstanding "I'll stop resisting now miss..." Ridly said sadly as he goes limp and quiet, letting the acids work on eating his body away "mum? Are you ok? You're crying..." Pikachu said as she hugs him "I need to bring him back..." Raichu says "bring who back? The bad Pokemon?" Pichu asks "yes...." She replies "why? I thought he was bad" he says "it was a misunderstanding..." She says as she gets up"I'll be back soon, stay here and protect the den" raichu says as she walks out and towards her old friends house.

She soon reaches a small and old looking house that seems abandoned. She knocks on the door "what do you want?" A voice says behind the door "nina? It's Riley, I need your help" Riley said as a cloaked figure opens the door "with what?" Nina asks "I need you to bring someone back from the dead" Riley says as she spits out a riolu skull "alright, it'll take a day or two to bring him back" nina says as she takes the skull inside "thank you " Riley replies as she walks off and waits for ridly to be brought back.

A few days later, Riley goes back to nina's home and knocks on her door "just in time" nina says as she opened the door "he is still asleep but he is alive" she adds "great, may I come in?" Riley asks "sure, but don't touch anything" nina replied as she walks in and Riley follows. Nina leads her to a bedroom where ridly is asleep in a bed "thank you for this, I'll take him home now" Riley says as she picks him up and walks out.

Ridly starts to wake up, which shocked him as he opens his eyes to see he was in the cave where the scary raichu ate and tried to digest him. Ridly looks at his arm and see's it is fully healed! nina's 'treatment' fixed his arm. "was it a dream...?" Ridly thinks as he stands up, a bit dizzy "hi!" Pikachu says from behind him, making him jump. Ridly quickly looks at the pikachu "it wasn't a dream...but...how am i alive?" Ridly says to himself "mums friend brought you back!" Pichu replies as he walks over "why...? I thought she hated me.." Ridly asks "I don't hate you" Riley says as she walks in.  Ridly looks at her and hides behind a rock, scared "I'm sorry for hurting you...I truly am..." Riley says wholeheartedly "really...?" Ridly asks "yes, it was a misunderstanding, I thought you killed him on purpose" Riley replies. Ridly begins to cry thinking about what happened to Lucas and Lara. Riley hugs ridly and sighs "I promise to take care of you" Riley says as ridly looks up at her "you mean that?" Ridly asks "yep!" Riley replies as ridly hugs her tightly "thank you!" Ridly says "time to introduce ourselves, I'm Riley. The two pichu's are Pete and Peter, and pikachu is pika" Riley says as ridly greets them "I'm ridly, it's nice to meet you all" ridly says as they all hug him, although ridly was still sad about his past he is happy about his new family where his new brothers treats him kindly unlike Lucas.
hope you enjoy :D
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Good story but it seems some questions haven't been answered. Will there be a part two by any chance?