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Shadows sister

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Shadow's sister.


About 5 years after shadow was released from jail her parents, Juilliard and Jill, decided that they wanted another kid so after a few months Jill laid a egg and in a few weeks, it hatched to reveal a beautiful baby seviper. After a few days they discovered that their daughter was a girl so they named her, jewel. So the story starts with jewel slithering through a forest popular for young predators to practice hunting. Jewel wasn't looking for any old prey, she was looking for her best friend, a male zorua named Zurich. It turns out that Zurich is jewels only friend because the town doesn't trust seviper's after what shadow did. "I'm coming for you Zurich!" jewel said as she can smell he's nearby. She grins and lunges into a bush and coils around Zurich "ugh!" Zurich called out as she coils around him fully "gotcha" jewel said with a cute giggle "yep, you're getting good at this" Zurich said as he smiled "thanks! But I can only find you because I know your scent to well" jewel said "want me to get some of friends to help you?" Zurich asked "alright" jewel said "but later" she added as she lifts him up into the air "what are you doing?" Zurich asked "I'm going to eat you" jewel said "n-no wait! I just got my fur clean recently!" Zurich said. He knows jewel won't hurt him, but he still doesn't want to be eaten "you can clean it again" jewel said as she tosses him up into the air and catches him in her maw and in one powerful GULP! Zurich is pushed down her throat and into her empty belly. Zurich smiles and starts to rub, knowing jewel likes it. When he started to rub jewel started to murr happily. Zurich laughs and keeps going until he gets tired and stops "thanks" jewel said as she slithers home. On her way home she see's that most creatures avoid her "why do people avoid me like I'm going to kill them?" Jewel asked "not sure, maybe they don't like seviper's..." Zurich suggested "but they like my parents..." Jewel said "..,they don't like me..." She add's "ask your parents why then, they'll know" Zurich said "I'll do that. Want me to take you home?" Jewel asked "sure, thank you" Zurich replied "no problem!" Jewel replied as she slithers to Zurich's home, which is a just around the Corner from her house. She stops and starts to cough him up and in a few seconds Zurich is in front of her covered in sticky sliver "eww, do you know how hard it is to get saliva out of fur? It's quiet hard!" Zurich complains "build a bridge and get over it" jewel says as she slithers off "whatever!" Zurich says and goes Inside while jewel goes to her house "you're late" Juilliard said "I know, I wanted to take my friend home." Jewel replied "whatever, dinner is on the table, and it's cold" Juilliard said as he slithers off. Jewel grunts and goes into the kitchen and finds a slab of cold meat on the table. She sniffs it "beef..." She says and swallows it whole. She yawns and decides to ask them in the morning so she goes to her bedroom and goes to sleep.

In the morning she wakes up and goes into the kitchen where Jill is preparing breakfast with the help of their family friend lura, a lucario "morning jewel!" Lura said as Jill turns to jewel "hello jewel" Jill said "morning girls" jewel said with a smile. "Hey mum, I can I talk with you?....in private?" Jewel asked "sure. lura, can you finish up?" Jill ask "sure" she replied as jewel and jill goes into a empty room used for storage "what is it you want to talk about?" Jill asked "mum...why does everyone avoid me?" Jewel asked. Jill looks at her and sighs "I knew this day would come..." Jill said sadly "what day would come? What are you talking about?" Jewel asked "jewel....you are not our first daughter....you have a sister..." Jill said as jewel looks shocked "what!?" Jewel said in shock "you have a older sister....Jane" Jill said "you knew about her and didn't tell me! Why!" Jewel said "because we don't like her anymore, not after what she did. we even disowned her" Jill said "what was so bad that you would disown her!?" Jewel yelled "this!" Jill yelled as she pulled out a newspaper clipping from a box and showed it to jewel. It depicted what Jane did to the town and the total killings which was 53 "wow..." Jewel said "that's why we disowned her, she's a blood thirsty murderer" Jill said "people avoid you because they think you'll be like your sister" jill added. "Oh....ok...." Jill said as she slithers out and Jill sighs and tells Juilliard what happened while jewel has breakfast and goes out to Zurich's house.

She knocks on the door and Zurich's mother answers it, she is a zoroark named Zulu "hello jewel" Zulu said happily. Zulu knows about Jane but she knows that jewel won't become like her so she likes her "hey Zulu, is Zurich home?" Jewel asked "he always is, he never leaves on his own" Zulu said with a huff "anyway,I'll go get him" Zulu said as she walks off and soon Zurich appears at the door "hey" Zurich says "what is it?" He asks "I just found out I have a older sister!" Jewel said "really? Cool!" Zurich said "yeah, anyway. Want to get your friends to help me hunt?" Jewel asked "sure! We'll meet in our clearing in ten minutes" Zurich said as jewel slithered off to the forest while Zurich got some of his friends.

Jewel is waiting in the clearing then suddenly Zurich emerges from a bush followed by a riolu and a buizel "hey jewel!" Zurich said as jewel looked over and smiles "hi" she replied as she looks at Zurich's friends "I'm rio" the riolu said "and I'm ripple" the buizel said happily as he looks at jewel "you're Jill's daughter, aren't you?" Ripple said "how do you know that..?" Jewel asked. Ripple laughed nervously "lucky guess" he said "anyway, who's ready to start?" Zurich said "I am!" Ripple and rio said"alright then! Lets start!" Zurich said as jewel closed her eyes while rio, Zurich, and ripple ran off and hide. after a minute she began to look for them "well, I can smell Zurich, but not the other two" jewel thought to herself as she decides to get Zurich first. Zurich was hiding in a bush but suddenly he was tackled by a growlith "what the!?" Zurich said "oh sorry! Thought you were someone else!" Growlith said as she gets off of him "I'm Lilly! Who are you?" Lilly asked "I'm Zurich, what are you doing out here?" Zurich asked "I'm training to be a predator! But I can't find any of the people helping me..." Growlith said "well you found me, and I'm helping my friend to be a predator too" Zurich said happily "cool" Lilly replied. Suddenly jewel lunged Into the bush and coiled around both of them "hello Zurich and....growlith?" Jewel said confused a little "hey jewel, this is Lilly, she's also training to become a predator too" Zurich explained as Lilly waves "alright" jewel said "hey Lilly, wanna join us and have a big game of hide and eat with your friends and ours?" Zurich asked "sure! Sounds like fun!" Lilly said as jewel smiles "lets round up everyone" jewel said as Lilly runs off and so do Zurich.

A few minutes later, at the clearing, Zurich, rio and ripple are waiting with jewel while Lilly gets her friends. Soon Lilly emerges from a bush followed by a zangoose and eevee "I'm here!" Lilly said as jewel looks over and see's the zangoose "zangoose..." Jewel said lowly Jewel  doesn't hate zangoose's but they always attack her so she stays weary of them. Lilly walks over to jewel with the zangoose and eevee following "hi! I'm Lilly and this is vee and zane" Lilly said as she pointed to vee the eevee and zane the zangoose "alright, I'm jewel and this is ripple, rio and Zurich" jewel said "now, introductions aside, lets play!" Zurich said "wait! How do you play?" Rio asked as he never played it before "it's basicly you have to hide, and if I or Lilly find you, we eat you, last one not eaten doesn't get eaten" Zurich explains "ah, okay then" rio said "we'll count to 60 while you hide" jewel said as they ran off in different directions and jewel and Lilly counts.

Zurich thinks of a plan as he is always the first to be found by jewel "I have a idea" Zurich said as he covers himself in berries and hides in a berry bush "she can't smell me now" Zurich said as he goes quiet. Jewel and Lilly stops counting and sniffs the air "odd, I can't seem to find Zurich's scent" jewel said as she goes off to find them while Lilly goes straight for vee. Vee is hiding in a small hole she dug and covered it with leaves and grass and she waited. Lilly finds the hole and uses ember to burn away the leaves and she pulls vee out "gotcha!" Lilly said as Lilly shoves vee into her mouth. Vee struggling but lilly over powers her and easily gulps her down "aww" vee said as she curls up in her belly. Lilly grins then finds a new scent she hasn't smelled before, thinking it was new prey, she goes towards it. She soon comes across rio's hiding spot which was inside a tree. Lilly looks around until she finds the oping with rio in it "aha!" Lilly said as she pulled him out and pinned him down "you caught me" rio said as as Lilly shoves the riolu Into her wet maw. Rio struggles lightly as Lilly purrs and swallows him down "ugh, I can't possible fit anyone else in now, guess I'll rest in the clearing" lily said as she walks off with her large belly.

Meanwhile jewel is having no luck finding anyone. She can't smell Zurich and she can't smell anyone else. Ripple was watching her from a little lake. He sighs and gets out of the lake and goes over go her "hello" ripple said from behind her making get jump in fright "ah, hello" jewel said turning to him "why did you reveal yourself? You know I have to eat you" jewel said "I know, I don't really mind, it was just that you seemed frustrated" ripple said "I am...I can't find anyone..." Jewel said "well, try sniffing them out" ripple said "I tried but I don't know what they smell like" jewel said" then follow your nose to a new scent, if you smell something new chances are that it is new prey" ripple said "alright...thanks" jewel said "no problem! You can eat me now" ripple said "you sure? I'll give you another chance to hide" jewel said "nah, it's fine" ripple said "alright" jewel said as she coils around him lightly and she retracted her fangs so she doesn't hurt ripple. Ripple smiles and jewel places his head into her big maw and jewel starts to swallow him down. Ripple looks up and see's her pulsating throat slowly come closer until ripples head is pushed Into it and he starts to slide down a tight tube of slimy flesh. Soon he gets pushed into a roomier area than the throat, jewel's stomach. Which smelt oddly like flowers "it's comfy in here" ripple said as he gets comfy "that's good, you can rest, it might take a while until you can come out" jewel said "okay" ripple replied as he rested in jewels slimy belly.

Jewel sighs and starts to sniff the air looking for any new scents and sure enough, she picks one up. She smiles and follows the scent to a bush. She grins and lunges into the bush and coils around zane the zangoose. Zane struggles as he looks up at jewel and jewel grins "gotcha" jewel said "hehe, yeah I guess you did" zane said with a smile "time to eat!" Jewel said happily as she hangs zane above her mouth. Zane does nothing as jewel drops him into her maw. Jewel decided to savour the new taste as it tasted very good. She purrs as zane starts to struggle in her mouth. Zane looks down and see's jewel close her maw around him then he looks up and see's her throat open up and slowly sucks him down her tight and comfy throat into her slender and slimy belly with ripple who is already asleep "you know...for a seviper you seem pretty nice" zane said as he blushes slightly "thanks, you're the first zangoose to complement me and not insult me or attack me"  jewel said "I figured...most zangoose hate sevipers " zane said "I know...I don't even know why" jewel "neither do I...I don't attack sevipers " zane said "nor do I with zangoose" jewel said "thanks" zane said as he starts to falls asleep. "Time to find Zurich" jewel said as she slithers off.

Jewel makes it to the clearing where Lilly was resting. Jewel smiles and goes over to her and pokes her belly "who have you eaten?" Jewel asks "vee and rio" Lilly replies. Jewel thinks "that means there's only one left...Zurich" jewel said "yep, he won" Lilly said "I'm going to look for him, wanna help?" Jewel asked "sure" Lilly replied as she gets up and they walk off looking for Zurich "hey Zurich! You've won! Come out!" Jewel yelled "I doubt he'll come out" Lilly said "just wait" jewel said as Zurich emerges from a nearby bush "really?" Zurich asks "yep! You're the last one" jewel said "yay, I don't get eatan!" Zurich says happily"how come I couldn't smell you like I always do?" Jewel asked "I covered myself a in berries so my scent was masked" Zurich said "hmpf, smart" jewel said "would you be a dear and rub out bellies?" Jewel asked. "Sure" Zurich replied as he make a clone of himself and rubbed Lilly belly as well as jewels. The rubs made Lilly and jewel purr In delight. Zurich giggles as he continues until he gets tired and stops "want to rest on my belly? It's quiet comfy" said jewel "sure, it'll be a change to be on top of it instead of inside it" Zurich said "yeah well don't get used to it" jewel said with a chuckle as she coils up a d Zurich lies on top of her coils "I have room for two" jewel said to Lilly "alright" Lilly replies as she climbs on her coils and lies on her back next to Zurich. Zurich smiles and goes to sleep. And so does Lilly and jewel.

A few hours later jewel wakes up and see's the sun setting "wow. We've been asleep for hours" jewel said as she for up and gently took Zurich and Lilly out of her coils and onto the grass. Zurich wakes up and looks at her "hello" Zurich says as Lilly gets up"how long have we been asleep?" Lilly asks "about 5 hours" jewel replies "oh no! I need to go home!" Lilly said as she spat out vee and rio and runs off. Jewel smiles as she spits out zane and ripple who then wake up "it's late guys, it's time to go home" jewel said as they nod and run off "c'mon Zurich, lets go home"  jewel said as Zurich lies on jewels head and slithers off.

A few minutes later they get into town and see's police everywhere and people approaching her angrily "jewel what's going on?" Zurich said as a espeon teleports Zurich away and a lucario paralyses her "what's going on!? What did I do!?" Jewel yelled as they carried her away. She caught a glimpse of what happened and was shocked to see lots of dead body's. she even saw her parents dead body in the massacre as well. Her eyes widen and she started to cry. They threw her into a cell and shut the door. Jewel cries herself asleep that night.

In the morning jewel wakes up to the sound of a crowd talking then suddenly the cage opens and two espeon's pick her up with physic so she couldn't move. She looks around and see's she is in a court room. She looks up and see's the judge, which is a gradivour "jewel Richardson, you are here today for the relentless murders of the following people. A tv screen appears beside gardivour and it shows names. Jewel watches and was shocked to see Zulu, Jill and Juilliard. "I-I didn't kill any of them!" Jewel protested "I was in the forest all day!" She yelled. Gardivour nods and video's from security cameras around town show's jewel leaving her house and going into the forest "see!" Jewel said "just wait" gardivour said as a few minutes later jewel comes back and begins to attack. Jewel starts to kill everyone she came Into contact with. It shows Jill, Zulu and Juilliard trying to calm jewel down but that only ends up with Zulu neck cut and Jill's head chopped off and Juilliard with stabs in his chest. Jewel starts to cry "I never did that!" Jewel yelled but the video continues for ten more minutes "you killed 138 people in town, almost double what your sister did to this town" gardivour said "and for your crime you will be put Into solitary confinement for 20 years! Double your sisters sentence!" Gardivour said as jewel cries "no!" Gardivour gets up and jewel is teleports into a pitch black room with no exits. She starts to cry more over the loss of her family. "Hopefully Zurich will still be my friend in 20 years..." Jewel said sadly as she falls asleep.

To be continued...
Enjoy and stick aroubd for part 2! What will become of jewel? Post what you think will happen in part 2 in the comments below
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I WANNA BREAK JEWEL OUT ;W; AND HUG HER AND IDK....
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